some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise . others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with school . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days because of focusing only on learning at schools and spending too much time on electronic devices so . other people argue that

parents

have to be responsible for encouraging their offspring to take

a regular lessons

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while

believing that the majority accountability for promotion

heir

to do so should lie

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with

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schools.I will discuss both perspectives and give my own idea

To begin

with , it is generally believed that

parents

have more opportunities to share time

whit

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with

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their offspring and teach

their

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them

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good habits . In many ,cases

parents'

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parents

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consider a

roll

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role

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module for their

heir

if the

parents'

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parents

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do what and

also

the kid will

also

repeat Or perform. ,

Moreover

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parents'

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parents

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have many tools to motivate and encourage their inheritor than the university.

For example

at home father can tell his youth if the youngster will do physical exercises or participate

a

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in a

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variety of

compilations

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competitions

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related to the sport the father will buy a phone or bicycle and others. if the juvenile does not with these requirements

parents'

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may be punished and may even use force and

hall

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has no right to beat

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and there is no or it can be said that less opportunity to promote

successor

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. In ,addition every pair of

parents'

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usually

have

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one or two scions which means they can give enough care and attention to their offspring's health

while

it is impossible at a faculty with thousands of students. On the other ,hand not all

parents

' are available to spend too much time with their offspring and have enough knowledge and test for kids. To cite another example if the inheritor wants to play football and he does not know the technique to how to play and she is

that is

not an expert but the physical education teachers who teach at the academy know home teaches the

heir

to play or do exercises correctly. There are no conditions for the beneficiary to do some exercises at home and the department has a gym and tools. ,

Furthermore

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heir

usually find it easier to keep discipline at the seminary and sometimes are enthusiastic to take

task

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with their friends.

To sum up

I firmly believe that

this

is both schools' and

parents

' responsibility to encourage offspring to

take

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activity regularly because it can give them more motivation and conditions to keep healthy