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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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A number of
companies
 advertise their
products
 with emphasising their new points in the
comtemporary
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contemporary
 world. In my opinion,
this
 is primarily caused by one of the sales strategies of
companies
, which can help the number of sales increase efficiently. I believe there are more drawbacks than benefits because these kinds of advertisements can be considered as
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 and harmful environment. Most
of
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companies
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the companies
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, to grow their sales turnover, are often required to inform of
an
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attractive
information
 about their
products
 to their customers.
Therefore
, they have basically a tendency to
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 their new
charactaristics
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characteristics
, which is more impressive than the
imformation
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information
 which they already experienced, in an advertisement.
In addition
, as a benefit point,
this
 kind of
information
 can
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 useful
information
consumers
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for consumers
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 to select items. One of the flaws is that consumers are
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 provided
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false
information
apting
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opting
 to be included in
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over-emphasised advertising.
Such
 situation is
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a disadvantage
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 for people who are interested in and buy
this goods
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these goods
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 because they
minght
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might
disaperd
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disappeared
 the differences between actual
fanctions
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functions
 and
fanctions
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functions
 which they have expected at deciding to purchase it. Another negative aspect is that encouraging people
buy
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 new
products
 are likely harmful effect on the environment. Because of being promoted to buy new
products
 by
an appealing advertisements
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appealing advertisements
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, people tend to buy new
products
 without considering how extent they need
this
 product. Wasting items can be recognized as earth-
unfriendry
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unfriendly
friendly
. In conclusion, while there is partly benefit, I argue emphasising new sides through advertising by
companies
 is more harmful
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 consumers
behaviors
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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