University should accept the equal number of male and female student in each subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement

In today's modern time, men and
women
are treated equally. Each
person
has the
right
to choose what they want regardless of their
gender
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for example
the
topic
stated above. Should the university accept
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equal number of male and female
student
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students
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in each
subject
? If that specific
subject
is a
pre-requisite
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in order to graduate,
then
a student should not be deprived of their
right
to
enroll
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in that
subject
may it be a male or a female. If you come to think of it, the
topic
is somewhat implicating
gender
inequality given that it is asking for an opinion. Matters like these should not be a
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of an argument because
this
puts an imaginary barrier onto something that was already erased in the past,so to speak.The barrier that I am talking about is
gender
discrimination. Let me put it
this
way,
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, If
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disregard the main thought of the
topic
above which is enrolling in a
subject
and
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replace
replaced
it with something broad like "Should University accept
the
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equal number of male and female students?",wouldn't it sound discriminating?now if you go back to the
topic
which is a little bit more specific than the one I gave, It does not sound
right
. Each
person
has the
right
to take up a
subject
as long as that individual is qualified and has the capacity to pass that
subject
.
Furthermore
, It is the
person
's capability that should be taken into consideration and not the
gender
or the number of learners that should be used as a basis for being accepted in a certain
subject
. There
a
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lot of
gender
eqality
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equality
advocacies that were pushed by different groups in order to achieve the equal treatment that they sought
after
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. In the 21st century,professions that were specifically associated
to
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men are now
also
being dominated by
women
.
For instance
, being a
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soldier
or a police officer,
that
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used to be a man's job, but nowadays,I could see a lot of female soldiers and lady officers dominating the scene. Do you think they would be in that profession if
gender
inequality was not eradicated from our society's norms?
On the other hand
, there are
also
professions that were attributed to
female
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gender
in the history of men.
For example
,
Nursing
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profession. In the old times, only
women
take up nursing because they say that they are caring and their soft nature fits the qualifications which are for
this
job. Today there
a
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lot of male nurses who gives the same type of care that
women
deliver and sometimes much more than we can expect from a masculine
person
. going back to the statement above, if they applied that policy before,
then
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of professions might still be around. To sum it up, I
beleieve
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believe
that quality education should be justly given to any
person
who is striving to help themselves without looking down on their status,appearance, and most of all their
gender
. If you have what it takes and have
tha
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a
the
passion for what you are doing, you should not be
striiped
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stripped
striped
of the
previlage
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privilege
of choosing whatever
subject
you want or you need in order to graduate.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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