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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this approach.

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These days we are experiencing an accelerated increase in the number of individuals in developing countries. For some
people
, a solution for
this
,
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 is the incorporation of
GM
crops
 for the
production
 of
food
 grains. Despite the advantages that
this
 approach will bring, I believe it has more disadvantages, as
this
 essay will discuss. The overpopulation we can see nowadays has made it impossible for the government to fulfil the
food
 requirements in poor nations. An evident benefit of newer approaches
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 is that there will be a faster
production
 of
food
 grains.
As a result
 of
this
, governments can achieve more
food
 in a less period of time and would be able to fulfil the needs of the
people
.
On the other hand
, the use of
GM
crops
 is controversial, as some
people
 think is not healthy enough and will have serious consequences.
First
 of all,
GM
crops
 have some concerns because they have been related to the development of cancer.
This
 fact is evidenced by the increased number of cancer in
people
 that consume
this
food
.
In addition
 to that, it is
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 for the
production
 of
food
 and will
requiere
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require
 more technology. There is no doubt that developing nations don't have
enought
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enough
 money to afford
this
. In conclusion,
although
 the implementation of
GM
crops
 may help to enforce the manufacturation of grains, actually it is a technique
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 is not safe enough. The disadvantages that it brings
such
 as the development of serious health problems make it an unsafe method. I believe that governments must reinforce birth control measures
instead
 of new
food
production
 techniques.
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