Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this approach.

These days we are experiencing an accelerated increase in the number of individuals in developing countries. For some

people

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, a solution for

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is the incorporation of

GM

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crops

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for the

production

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of

food

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grains. Despite the advantages that

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approach will bring, I believe it has more disadvantages, as

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essay will discuss. The overpopulation we can see nowadays has made it impossible for the government to fulfil the

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requirements in poor nations. An evident benefit of newer approaches

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is that there will be a faster

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of

food

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grains.

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of

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, governments can achieve more

food

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in a less period of time and would be able to fulfil the needs of the

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.

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, the use of

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crops

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is controversial, as some

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think is not healthy enough and will have serious consequences.

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of all,

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crops

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have some concerns because they have been related to the development of cancer.

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fact is evidenced by the increased number of cancer in

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that consume

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food

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.

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to that, it is

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expensive

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for the

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of

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and will

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require

more technology. There is no doubt that developing nations don't have

enought

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enough

money to afford

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. In conclusion,

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the implementation of

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crops

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may help to enforce the manufacturation of grains, actually it is a technique

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is not safe enough. The disadvantages that it brings

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as the development of serious health problems make it an unsafe method. I believe that governments must reinforce birth control measures

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of new

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production

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techniques.