wich is more important friends or family? Give your opinion with examples.
Generally speaking, many
people
think that family is closer to us than Use synonyms
friends
in many stages of our life. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
who
I enjoy Change the pronoun
whom
spend
Change the form of the verb
spending
time
Use synonyms
,
Change preposition
with, people
people
who help me with I have Use synonyms
some
Correct quantifier usage
apply
issue
and who whom is Fix the agreement mistake
issues
better
trip. I will argue that family is more important for us.
Add an article
a better
the better
Firstly
, leisure Linking Words
time
is important to our daily routine and Use synonyms
people
who spend Use synonyms
time
with us can influence our happiness. Use synonyms
For instance
, many Linking Words
people
at home usually watch movies with their family because that make Use synonyms
their
feel happy. Correct pronoun usage
them
Additionally
, some Linking Words
people
said that Use synonyms
stay
at home with family is much better than Wrong verb form
staying
go
out with Wrong verb form
going
friends
. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, there are activities that Linking Words
people
enjoy more with Use synonyms
friends
Use synonyms
such
as Linking Words
go
to Wrong verb form
going
Add an article
the concert
a concert
concert
.
Fix the agreement mistake
concerts
Secondly
, Linking Words
people
have many issues Use synonyms
overtime
and family always are with them. To give one example, when some Correct your spelling
over time
relative
die, most of the Fix the agreement mistake
relatives
time
family keeps closer over the months. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
usually call Use synonyms
to
relatives when there is a big Change preposition
apply
problems
. Change the noun form
problem
However
, it can be said that Linking Words
friends
are Use synonyms
important
Add an article
an important
support
in bad moments helping Add the particle
to support
to
Change preposition
apply
people
to overcome the problem.
Use synonyms
Finally
, some Linking Words
people
believe that the person who accompanies us to travel is important Use synonyms
specially
with a relative because is easier to go whit Replace the word
especially
people
Use synonyms
who
we know well. Change the pronoun
whom
For example
, Linking Words
people
prefer to travel family since Use synonyms
them
know the food that Change the pronoun
they
enjoy
Change the verb form
enjoys
eat
together. Change the verb form
eating
Furthermore
, Linking Words
people
know the place Use synonyms
that
they like Correct word choice
where
sleep
. Add the particle
to sleep
Although
, there are some that Linking Words
believe
Replace the word
belief
travel
abroad with Wrong verb form
travelling
friends
is better to go to Use synonyms
the
party.
To sum up, Correct article usage
a
friends
and family are important to our life. I believe that family are most important Use synonyms
people
to support overtime either accompanies with issues or spending Use synonyms
time
in our leisure Use synonyms
time
.Use synonyms
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