More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

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this
present-society
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,
technology
is more likely to be a
media
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medium
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for communicating in both formal and informal conversation rather than being
face
to
face
.
However
,
this
technology
have
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both benefits and drawbacks which we will discuss now. When it comes to
an
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advantages of
such
technology
, people nowadays who
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a long-distance relationship or obligation are more convenient to use
such
new
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a new
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investment rather than a
face
to
face
solution.
Furthermore
, as in
this
COVID-19 crisis, a
face
to
face
conversation is considered to be a risky action,
this
leads
technology
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such
as zoom, google meets, and Microsoft teams to be a more suitable
technology
to
using
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use
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in
this
present-situation
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present situation
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. As long as COVID-19
continuing
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continues
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to spread,
technology
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the technology
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of communication is
also
be
using
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used
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in
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the eduction
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eduction
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education
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method,
as
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a
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student
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a student
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can join their device in
a
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electric meeting room together,
similarly
to a real classroom at school.
On the other hand
, there are
also
a
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apply
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drawbacks
of
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such
technology
.
for instance
, more useful function it has, high price it
cause
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causes
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. As
technology
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the technology
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required an internet connection, not only a cost of devices
such
as
computer
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a computer
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, notebook or
ipad
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iPad
pad
that cost a lot of money, internet network
is
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also
have
a monthly charges
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a monthly charge
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.
This
,
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makes
such
student
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students
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who
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their family cannot afford
this
kind of
outgoings
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outgoing
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may not access
an
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education like
others student
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other students
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. In conclusion, communicating
technology
suit with some group of people due to its advantages and disadvantages.
However
, I believe that if all-position people can be able to access
such
technology
, there will cause a lot more advantages in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Efficiency
  • Convenience
  • Instant messaging
  • Video calls
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Economical
  • Accessibility
  • Physical barriers
  • Nuanced understanding
  • Impersonal
  • Misunderstandings
  • Reliance
  • Technical failures
  • Vulnerable
  • Security breaches
  • Hacking
  • Data theft
  • Sensitive information
  • Digital communication
  • Face-to-face interactions
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