You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter; outline the situation propose ways to improve this situation request a meeting to discuss this Begin your letter 'Dear "Do not write any addresses”

#college #sports #leisure #facilities #students #outline #situation #request #begin #addresses”

Dear Sir, Trust that you are well and safe. My name is John and I am currently enrolled at St. George University. I am in year 2 of my English Literature Program. I am writing to you to bring to your attention the need for a better sporting culture at our Institution. Currently, we have sports clubs limited to only Football & Basketball.

However

, many students are interested in other activities which our University doesn't offer at present. I would like to propose a plan to understand the sporting needs of the student population and

accordingly

work towards building the facilities to cater to

this

need. I would love to set aside some time to discuss

this

with you. Kindly provide me with your availability and I will gladly schedule a slot with your secretary. Yours Faithfully, John

Submitted by saher.meeran on Thu Jan 27 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

138 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
The tendency of news reporters in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The news casters have been reporting on TV channels and making sensationalise news. The negative side of the world are being published on television rather than progress in the technology world. However, the affected of people by the problems from publishing bad news. But it is partly true, because it badly effects on human life and they feel in danger. This essay will elaborate further in the following paragraphs.
<4
band
The charts detail the percentages and number for visitors to and from from the UK from 1979 to 1999.
The graphs indicate the number of voyagers decided the UK as their destination and those who travelled abroad from the UK, during a 20-year interval. Also, the top five countries which British people travelled to is demonstrated.
7.5
band
A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter, ● explain what you are currently doing ● describe your suitability for this area of work ● say when you can attend an interview
I am writing in response to your advertisement in our local newspaper called Times , dated 28 Jun 2023. At the moment , I am studying at school. Besides , I go to extra lessons. I need an amount of money for them so , I decided to work. If you agree I will work in your restaurant as a waitress.
6.5
band
Prompt: Space travel has been made possible for sometime and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The notion of space tourism, while captivating, presents a dichotomy of viewpoints. I believe it constitutes a positive development for humanity as it offers a unique opportunity for individuals to explore outer space and broaden their horizons. However, it also carries potential negative consequences for the universe's environment and poses challenges for countries, particularly those that rely heavily on terrestrial tourism for their revenue.
4
band
Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government , while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The diagrams illustrate the existing plan of a university’s sports centre and and the proposed plan following the building.

You are studying at a college which has very limited sports and leisure facilities for students. Write a letter to the principal. In your letter; outline the situation propose ways to improve this situation request a meeting to discuss this Begin your letter 'Dear "Do not write any addresses”

Word Count

The tendency of news reporters in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The charts detail the percentages and number for visitors to and from from the UK from 1979 to 1999.

A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter, ● explain what you are currently doing ● describe your suitability for this area of work ● say when you can attend an interview

Prompt: Space travel has been made possible for sometime and some people believe that space tourism could be developed in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government , while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.