some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise . others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with school . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days because of focusing only on learning at schools and spending too much time on electronic devices so . other people argue that

parents

have to be responsible for encouraging their offspring to take the regular tests

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believing that the majority accountability for promotion successor to do so should lie

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schools.I will discuss both perspectives and give my own idea

To begin

with , it is generally believed that

parents

have more opportunities to share time

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their offspring and teach

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good habits . In many ,cases

parents

consider a

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module for their inheritor if the mother what and

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the minor will

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repeat Or perform. ,

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parents

have many tools to motivate and encourage their

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than the institute.

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at home father can tell his juvenile if the offspring will do physical exercises or participate in a variety of compilations related to the sport the parent will buy a phone or bicycle and others. if the kid does not with these requirements predecessor may be punished and may even use force and the faculty has no right to beat offspring and there is no or it can be said that less opportunity to promote

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. In ,addition every pair of

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one or two heirs which means they can give enough care and attention to their offspring's health

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a hall with thousands of students. On the other ,hand not all

parents

are available to spend too much time with their inheritor and have enough knowledge and test for kids. To cite another example if the offspring

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to play football and he does not know the technique to how to play and she

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is not an expert but the physical education teachers who teach at

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know

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teaches the scion to play or do exercises correctly. There are no conditions for the offspring to do some exercises at home and the department has a gym and tools. ,

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beneficiaries usually find it easier to keep discipline at the seminary and sometimes are enthusiastic to take the performance with their friends.

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I firmly believe that

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is both

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' and

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responsibility to encourage an heir to

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operation

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regularly because it can give them more motivation and conditions to keep healthy