With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

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Human activities like cutting down trees, city expansion, and unauthorized hunting leads to harm to the ecosystem of
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few
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have been pulled to the zone of extinction.
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, Protecting
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is very important to the earth harming any leaving creature can disturb the ecosystem of the earth and it needs to be saved. The living thing is a part of the horizon and they have the right to live but
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right has been harmed by humans due to the increase in population and expansion of infrastructure development. After all saving
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is very important for our future generation if we do not save
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creature, it will be endangered and cause death.
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, the extinction of the dodo had been in Madagascar one of the unique creatures that came to end because of humans many people live in the 21st century they got no idea of
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animal.
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, saving every animal is a vital factor for humans and they have the right to live. Preventive measures had to be taken for protecting
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and the UN has to raise awareness on the issue. Each nation should have proper rules and regulations of building infrastructure that should not harm forest areas.
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to many wastes from industries that have been exhausted in rivers,
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stopped
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while polluting water can cause disease to
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, Illegal hunters need to be severely punished and every hunting area should be monitored by the forest department. These all measures might decrease the extinction of
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animals
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have to be saved and protected, eventually whatever effect their death need to be prohibited, while their living on the land is important for our future generation.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
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