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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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There is a controversial notion heating a debate over the
job
 expectation. While some hold a view that
job
 satisfaction is the most pivotal element, the opposites make a statement that
job
 security
also
 plays a significant role.
Although
 each has its own perks, I would contend that it is ideal to combine both mentioned factors.
Job
 gratification is one of the pivotal elements in
people
's occupation selection. Its definition can vary from one to another including salary, motivation or personal interest, especially
working
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 environment. A suitable workplace can make
people
 feel comfortable and boost their productivity.
For instance
, Google, which is an internationally acclaimed technological corporation, provides not only canteens but
also
 recreational rooms to help their employees recharge their batteries when they feel stressed.
Thus
, iob contentment is imperative when a person choose a line of work. While the redeeming features of
job
 satisfaction are widely acknowledged, it is unfair if those of
job
 security are ignored. Staying in a vocation for a long time can bring
people
 more promotional opportunities. Some companies look at their seniority as
a criteria
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criteria
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 when they choose
a
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an
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upper-manager
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upper manager
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. If they devote
to
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themselves to
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 a company in the long term, they can be nominated to be a leader because they have a firm grasp
about
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of
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company
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the company
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 and their expertise. So
job
 security is
also
 integral in work choice. In conclusion,
job
complancence
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complacence
complacency
 and long term
job
 are important
career
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 selection , so
people
 need to balance both of them to find the most appropriate occupation.
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