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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new realway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In some ,countries fast
trains
 are part of the everyday life of the population. Some people believe that
,
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money
 should be spent to build a new railway line for fast
trains
 to
travel
 between
cities
; others believe
this
money
 can be better expanded on existing public
transport
. In my point of view,
money
 should be expend on both types of
transport
. Some society believes that the existing public
transport
 is good and just need improvement,
for example
, those people may think that the actual
transport
 is efficient, fast and
also
 may think that for vacation or to
travel
 to other
cities
, the aeroplane still the best option,
however
 in some countries like Europe people tend to choose fast
trains
 than an aeroplane to go to another part of their country because are more convenient. The fast train can be convenient for so many reasons; the fast train can be cheaper than an aeroplane and
also
 can be faster. The development of fast
trains
 will facilitate the everyday life of the population,
for example
, some jobs demand their workers to
travel
 to different
cities
, to visit clients and meet.
In addition
, the fast tube can be beneficial for days off or short vacation,
for example
; some countries that, already have fast
trains
 as an option, tend to
travel
 to other
cities
 using
this
transport
.
However
, I believe that one
transport
 complements other because both have different propers, one is for short travels and the other is for longer.  In conclusion, some individuals still believe that
money
 that can be used to develop fast
trains
 can be better expend if used for existing
transport
,
however
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 those two
transport
 offer different functions. Currently, the lifestyle of our population demands faster and cheaper ways to
travel
 to other parts of their country.
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