Music is played in every society and culture in the world today. Some people think that music brings only benefits to individuals and societies. Others, however, think that music can have a negative influence on both. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Over the
last
two or three decades,
music
has been
develping
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developing
around the world tremendously than ever before due to the innovation of technology. Rap plays across the world in every community and
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; some believe that opera can be brought only advantages to the common public as well as communities too while others say that
this
creates an adverse impact on
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both.
This
essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, melody can give only benefits to individuals and societies undoubtedly because
this
provides numerous enthusiasm and motivation,
therefore
, humankind can be active a plethora of and reduces stress and depression that's why tons of fans have
music
across the world.
For example
, Korean band musicians which
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BTS has tons of followers and fans across the globe, they
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numerous life motivation by their
songs
lyrics and rhythm,
therefore
, countless mankind gets self-confident from their
songs
. Tune not only gives entertainment-based
songs
but
also
creates a multitude of social awareness through their
songs
,
therefore
,
this
can be provided only merits to the common public and society.
On the other hand
,
music
can have an adverse control
to
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individuals and societies because some
songs
might be
manupulated
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manipulated
to
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humankind through their lyrics.
For instance
,
the
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Tamil
nadu
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state of India,
last
year election time political parties made a song for
manupulating
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manipulating
manipulation
to their voters,
therefore
, mankind has voted a wrong ruling party and now they feel that. These kinds of
neagtive
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negative
influences can be created by
songs
and some people addicted to listening to some
voilent
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violent
rock.
Hence
,
this
can have a
neagtive
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negative
control
to
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the population. To conclude, opera is the blood of people's
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this
is interconnected. Creating the social awareness and motivation to the population of
music
; public addict to listen to some
voilent
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violent
songs
and manipulate to the public by their lyrics is a negative impact of
this
trend.
However
, in my opinion, about
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this
, rock brings countless benefits to
public
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as well as society and I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy and happier society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Harmony
  • Melody
  • Rhythm
  • Socio-cultural
  • Artistic expression
  • Cognitive development
  • Soundtrack
  • Moral implications
  • Acoustic ecology
  • Intellectual property
  • Authenticity
  • Commercialization
  • Media literacy
  • Sensory overload
  • Acculturation
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