Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Nowadays,technology has become

trending

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topic in recent years.we can learn anything by sitting at home through social

media

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like Facebook,Instagram and Twitter.

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we do not always go to our friends home to meet them.because we can talk with them easily by the phone.

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essay will discuss both merits and demerits.

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with,social

media

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platform has brought positive effects on

people

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firstly

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,it gives us a lot of information about the development of

another countries

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although

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we have many facilities available to get the

news

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but

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people

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prefer to

use

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media

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platforms to get

news

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like way2news through

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app we can learn new data about the outer world.

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,when I was young ,

people

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used to acquire

news

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through

newspaper

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newspapers

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like Hindustan times,but now technology completely changed,

people

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use

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only

internet

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the internet

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eventhoug

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even though

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news paper

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newspaper

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is easy to carry and it is cheaper.

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,technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us

new

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avenues while keeping ourselves updated with current affairs and

latest

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the latest

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news

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.it facilitates us to make life easier.we can

also

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see

people

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who

far

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are far

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away from us by using Skype and

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for instance

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,in

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apply

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earlier days ,there were no

such

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amenities,if they want to talk

their

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to their

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friends they need to go directly

their

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houses or send a message through a letter.my grandparents used to send a message by

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letter,but it takes more time.now,we can send a text by using Gmail.

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,it is truly said,no rose without thrones.can the drawback of

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initiation be ignored?

primarly

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primarily

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,the lack of communication

limited

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among

people

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,because many

people

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are addicted to

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use

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using

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internet

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the internet

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as a result

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of there is a chance to spoil their life.

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,they do not spend their time with their families. To conclude,everyone should

use

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social

media

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in a good way.

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pros

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the pros

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are more than

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the cons

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.we can access information easily by using

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

Introduction
Body paragraph 1 – advantages
Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

The main advantage is...
The disadvantage of this...
The main benefit...
Despite these advantages...
One possible drawback...

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

295 words

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