Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowadays,technology has become
trending
Correct article usage
a trending
show examples
topic in recent years.we can learn anything by sitting at home through social
media
like Facebook,Instagram and Twitter.
moreover
we do not always go to our friends home to meet them.because we can talk with them easily by the phone.
this
essay will discuss both merits and demerits.
To begin
with,social
media
platform has brought positive effects on
people
.
firstly
,it gives us a lot of information about the development of
another countries
Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
show examples
.
although
we have many facilities available to get the
news
,
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
show examples
people
prefer to
use
media
platforms to get
news
like way2news through
this
app we can learn new data about the outer world.
for example
,when I was young ,
people
used to acquire
news
through
newspaper
Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
show examples
like Hindustan times,but now technology completely changed,
people
use
only
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
show examples
,
eventhoug
Correct your spelling
even though
news paper
Correct your spelling
newspaper
show examples
is easy to carry and it is cheaper.
Furthermore
,technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds and providing us
new
Change preposition
with new
show examples
avenues while keeping ourselves updated with current affairs and
latest
Correct article usage
the latest
show examples
news
.it facilitates us to make life easier.we can
also
see
people
who
far
Add a missing verb
are far
show examples
away from us by using Skype and
whatsapp
Correct your spelling
WhatsApp
Whatsapp
.
for instance
,in
an
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
earlier days ,there were no
such
amenities,if they want to talk
their
Change preposition
to their
show examples
friends they need to go directly
their
Change preposition
to their
show examples
houses or send a message through a letter.my grandparents used to send a message by
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
letter,but it takes more time.now,we can send a text by using Gmail.
However
,it is truly said,no rose without thrones.can the drawback of
this
initiation be ignored?
primarly
Correct your spelling
primarily
primary
,the lack of communication
limited
Add a missing verb
is limited
show examples
among
people
,because many
people
are addicted to
use
Change the verb form
using
show examples
internet
Add an article
the internet
show examples
as a result
of there is a chance to spoil their life.
therefore
,they do not spend their time with their families. To conclude,everyone should
use
social
media
in a good way.
finally
,
pros
Correct article usage
the pros
show examples
are more than
cons
Correct article usage
the cons
show examples
.we can access information easily by using
internet
Add an article
the internet
show examples
.
Submitted by anushachenna15 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: