Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Older
people
are recommended by doctors to have a regular exercise plan but most of them do not have any routine. Is there
a
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two major reasons behind
this
and
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it appears to be a difficult task to motivate
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to do the some the main reason for
this
problem is that they have a low level of energy and strength.
this
can be explained as a
person
gets older, the level of energy and activity gradually decreases and
as a result
, older
people
lose interest in performing physical
exercises
.
in addition
, if they want to perform physical
exercises
, maybe these
exercises
do not correspond to their age. another reason is that many elderly
people
from an early age did not play sports and led a sedentary lifestyle .
for example
, if a
person
has been playing sports since childhood, will be active in doing physical
exercises
and
he
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retains
this
method until the end of his life
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the other hand, if a
person
has not shown interest in physical
exercises
, he will remain with
this thoughts
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for a
person
who is 60 or 50, it is impossible to change his lifestyle. another reason for
this
is that most of the elderly suffer from a variety of diseases and chronic and
this
may prevent them from doing regular physical exercise. despite the doctor's advice, many of these
people
are afraid to perform physical
exercises
,
as a result
of which they may get injured when performing. in my opinion, these
people
can be encouraged by some life measures. in order to inspire or encourage them, their government should take some measures,
for example
, r-ct who will regularly perform wellness
exercises
to give
people
benefits,
for example
, when paying taxes, or perhaps give free vouchers to some resorts or sports clubs. following
this
, the government can create a mobile offer that counts the steps and for
each
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100
steps
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it is possible to give up to a certain amount of money. in conclusion, many elderly
people
are physically and economically unable to exercise regularly,
this
can be partially corrected by investing large funds from the budget. you will see these how to say reforms to touch other segments of the population
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