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Band 6.5

Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages.

Nowadays schools provided foreign
languages
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 skills to the
children
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 and it is a really good initiative but
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 should not be mandatory for every child. I partially agree and disagree with the statement. Let's start with
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 why I feel disagree with
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. Sometimes learning foreign
languages
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 will help you in your career as well as in personal growth. In childhood ,age
children
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 have enough
time
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 to learn anything and
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 they adapt to anything very quickly. As I have seen in India some schools have special staff for teaching
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 and it is really very good for
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. Some parents have a dream that their
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 will go for
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 study abroad and in
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 case, if
children
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 already know the particular language
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 they don't need to learn again that language and it will
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 save special learning
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. If you
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 see
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 as career level
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 at some point employee must visit foreign countries to meet the different company customers and in
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 situation employee never feel bad about his speaking skills because he had already learned the
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. Now come to the agreed point. In most cases, students do not want to learn foreign
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 as they never wanted to go outer their country. They only want to work in their country so It will be a
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 waste for them. In conclusion, schools should have special programs for those who want to learn foreign
languages
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 as only some
children
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 are interested to learn. By doing
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 it will be a benefit for both interested and not interested
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 in terms of cost,
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, etc.

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