In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.

In

Britian

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Britain

, the majority of elder

people

live in a

common place

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named an old age home where nurses and

medicine

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staff look after them. There is an opinion that the

government

should take expenses for

this

care because

people

have paid a lot of their

taxes

for

this

privilage

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privilege

and it seems fair. I accept

this

point of view and think that the elderly should have an opportunity to live in places like these

by

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the

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apply

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government

support.

Britian

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Britain

Britain's

economy has a significant part of

bugdet

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budget

by

rezidents’

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residents

taxes

, and the more

people

’s salary, the more

taxes

they should pay. Logically, an

eldery

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elderly

person has no

resource

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to continue working so after many years, the

government

should provide the living in home-cares. The problem is that

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elderly

eldery

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the eldery

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outnumbers

working class

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people

.

Therefore

, the

government

gets less money and there is no opportunity to provide excellent care service. I think that a long term budget plan is needed

that

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is why economic reforms should be carried out for

proper

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distribution of

taxes

.

Therefore

some

people

think about their future in advance and set up a provident fund which can help

to

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them to

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live with dignity in a pension period.

Also

, if an

eldery

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elderly

person cannot carry about themselves, the

responsobility

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responsibility

leaves under the family. Sufficient care and attention

is

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often exhausting in a long distance, and

that is

a problem for dysfunctional families because of their poor financial state.

Hence

, the

government

should consider a wide range of factors for providing help for a specific case of giving financial support for aged

people

. In conclusion, if the

government

controls citizens’ finances and makes the rules which influence the quality of the

people

’s

life

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lives

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,

then

the authorities are primarily responsible for providing high quality for aged

people

. There is no doubt that it is normal for developed countries like Britain.