You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline infrom him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans invite him for an outing.

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Hello Dav, How are you?I hope you and your family members all are doing good. I am writing to thank you for your generous offer to let me stay in your apartment during my visit to

Rome

. Let me describe my situation. In the beginning, I planned to visit

Rome

all by myself. But after I had talked to a friend of mine, he told me that he is interested in visiting

Rome

with me. So, I don't think I would be able to stay in your apartment during my stay in

Rome

since my friend is going to be with me. Our flight will be

Monday.

Although

we are planning to stay in

Rome

for 3 days only, we would be happy to invite you for a dinner

Thursday at 7:00 P.M. I don't know if

this

will be convenient for you or not. If it's not a good time for you please, let me know what would be a good time for you. It would be lovely to hear back from you if you have time to write. Best wishes, Jay

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

185 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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