Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Some number of the population around the world is thinking that

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currently we are facing a serious crisis of losing the rare flora and fauna,

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is one

cause

of the environmental problem. Whereas some more people explain that other issues are responsible for global warming.

Although

rising temperature and increasing plastic pollution are the major causes for harmful effects

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on the

enviroment

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environment

we can not forget how the wildfires are affecting

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other living beings. The demand for housing and food is increasing for the rising population

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to fulfil that many countries are demolishing the forest areas to use woods to build houses

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to create more space for humans to accommodate. Because of

this

, forests are now shrinking in size. ,

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the wildfires are burning the majority of the old plants. For ,instance the Amazon fire that

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took

place in 2020,

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burned more than 1000 rare plants which are more than 100 years old.

Furthermore

, some nations are building artificial islands in the sea to build luxurious resorts which

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marine life. The man-made islands are in Dubai have great effects on the fish.

However

, in others view the main

cause

of the environmental changes is

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the rise

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in temperature, which is true. Many countries have seen a change in weather patterns and the scientists explain,

this

is an indication that the world is in danger because of global warming.

For example

- the weather is unpredictable, India has seen rainfall in the month of December.

Moreover

, another main

cause

of serious effects on environmental changes is plastic pollution. The metro cities have the problem of waste management, they did not care to look for it more seriously and they dump

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on the edge of the city.

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is

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harmful

as the plastic in it does not decompose. The waste company burn them, and the smoke

cause

increase in the toxins in the air. In conclusion, I believe we should take care of our earth. The rare plants and animals should be preserved as they are part of the food chain, not only

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we should

also

need to

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them to increase their numbers. ,

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we need to look for a way to lower our carbon emission which is a major

cause

of the rise in

temprture

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temperature

.