Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: Explain your travel plans. Describe the interesting places you plan to visit. Ask for suggestion for sightseeing options.

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Dear Kumar, Long time no see! How are you? Are your family safe and sound?

I've

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I have

I have got

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a surprise for you! I'

going there

this

Christmas Holiday and I'

so cheerful. I'll be there,

New

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in New

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Delhi, just before the

christmass

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Christmas

, on

15th

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the 15th

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of December. I'

going to stay there till the

first

weekend of the new year. I can't describe my happiness more, because it gives me a chance of not only hanging out with you but

also

dining out with you in Indian famous restaurants. I've heard lots of interesting facts about India, and I think the best place to visit there is

Taj

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the Taj

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Mahal. That memorial mosque was built by Shah Jahan a long time ago. I'

in love with its architecture. It's unbelievable that I'

going to explore it in the real world. You know, I've always watched documentaries about that place on the net till now and

this

is like a dream. I'll definitely need your help finding more tourist attractions since you're a native. I'

seeking a traditional bazaar for buying high-quality Indian spices. Do you have any suggestions? Please do me a favour and attach the name and address of them in an attachment of the reply. I hope to see you soon best wishes, Sina

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