It is more important to invest in further education rather than to gain work experience after finishing university in order to find a good job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that pursuing higher
education
plays a more vital role in being successful in finding a decent
job
compared to entering
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after graduation. In my opinion, I strongly believe that continuing
education
is more essential and in
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I intend to express my justifications. It is my view that as finding an adequate
job
has dramatically become competitive, having a higher
education
would potentially distinguish
job
seekers and pave the way in order to find a more suitable
job
. To illustrate, some corporations tend to recruit employees with strong credentials since most of their positions are highly demanding and
also
are required to be done by an expert,
therefore
, an individual who has
masters
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degree or PhD is probably more welcomed in
such
companies.
In addition
, not only does holding a higher degree broaden people’s horizons and knowledge, but
also
gives them a sense of confidence because it substantially contributes to having a better social status.
In contrast
, some people claim that entering workplaces is more crucial. They firmly insist that if youths do not enter workplaces after their graduation, they will not become successful in their future as most jobs require a person with highly-developed interpersonal skills,
thus
,
such
manners will not be easily gained but with working.
However
, I do not find
this
statement convincing because most tertiary institutions are organizing some specific internship courses In order to prepare students for entering
market
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and with
such
amenities students are more likely to become accomplished in their social career. In conclusion, while there are some negative perspectives associated with pursuing
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education
, I completely agree with it as it is more beneficial for people’s
career
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and social standing in
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future due to the reasons I have already mentioned above
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