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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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Today, various fast food
items
such
 as chips and candy have a high level of sugar in them,
also
 soda bottles contain
a
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 most percentage of sugar. Considering the detrimental effects of sugar, it is suggested that the prices of
such
products
 should be increased,
as a
result
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 the people may avoid eating it. In my view,
this
 is not certainly a solution for
this
 problem. We need to encourage individuals for changing their diet habits. In most of the cities as well as in some of the villages it is a common practice to eat fast foods, which takes less time to cook.
Moreover
, the younger generation is fancy towards the sweet taste of
items
. The bottle of soda and packets of chips are famous among the children as they not only taste good but the packaging is designed in a way to attract the pupils. Because of changes in the patterns of prices, a major effect will not happen on purchasing patterns.
Although
, the sale of
such
products
 will notice a slight drop it is not a significant amount to be considered. To change
this
 pattern, we need to change the eating habits of consumers. People should be aware of the harmful effects of
such
 foods,
also
 the organs of the human body will show changes.
Furthermore
, the government should encourage schools and colleges not to sell
such
products
 on campus. An application of additional taxes is one of the options for
this
 problem,
thus
 those
products
 will be more valued.
For example
- extra tax charges for
such
 sweet goods will increase the overall value. ,
Also
 fast-food chains should redesign the
items
 on the menu. In conclusion, I believe adding additional charges to
such
products
 which are dangerous to our health will not change our habit of eating.
Although
, changing the view towards these
items
 will show some improvement. considering
this
 I disagree with the statement.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar consumption
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • encourage
  • expensive
  • reduce
  • effectively
  • discourage
  • tight budget
  • purchasing
  • disproportionately
  • lower-income individuals
  • healthier food choices
  • demand
  • regardless
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