You have trouble paying rent for the house where you live. Write a letter to your landlord explaining your current financial situation and ask for a house change.

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Dear Sir Smith, I am writing

this

letter in connection with my current economic climate and to present why I have not been able to pay my rent.

Also

, I would like to ask for a

house

change if it is not a trouble. As you know my husband and I ran a family business of retail for more or less 10 years and our financial status was pretty great. Unfortunately, after my husband passed away

last

month our business profit has been a grave issue. Honestly, I was just been able to pay my staffs salary and I have not been able to even pay my children's tuition fees ever cents. The

house

is one of my biggest problems right now. Simply put, I do not need a seven-bedroom

house

anymore now that I am struggling and grieving. I cannot not only pay the rent but

also

pay the maid to clean my

house

. Anyway, I would like to ask you to change my residence to a three-bedroom cost-effective

house

or even an apartment if it is possible.

This

way I will be able to accommodate my family's needs and

also

I am able to pay the rent on time.

This

is all I would like to share with you. Thank you for taking the time to read

this

letter. Yours faithfully,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

223 words

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