To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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As the human being population is increasing, resources are never going to be sufficient. To solve
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problem.
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resistant to accepting it because of natural factors. I will show that
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more detrimental cons than pros. Adding edible
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as
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can mean fuel to the fire.
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, new diseases are originating at
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alarming levels through
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, live animal stock . To add insect is the level zero from which diseases or
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gets evolved.
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, the covid-19 virus primary source was a bat and the world saw a devastating pandemic.
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, it disrupts
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's plan to maintain the earth's equilibrium.
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, it disrupts the entire
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chain designed by
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which can cause harmful effects in immediate future.
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, to solve the demand-supply issue, adding
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into human being
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is a direct
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to a problem. As
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are available and can be produced in gigantic wealth. But
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step will be considered as avoiding the real issue of population increase.
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on the price of damaging the
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plan for which our upcoming generations have to bear consequences.
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, in future there will be a shortage of
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another living being will be added.
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should be
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that it should not damage
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. To conclude, taking easy solutions for long term loss. On the whole, disadvantages are more than advantages, which can cause deep damage to the earth's ecosystem which are not repairable.
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, the world is not ready to suffer another covid-19 kind of virus. I strongly believe it should not be implemented.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • edible insects
  • increasing population
  • food needs
  • unhealthy
  • negatively affect
  • benefits
  • drawbacks
  • nutritional value
  • sustainable
  • efficient
  • abundant
  • accessible
  • economic benefits
  • culinary diversity
  • social acceptance
  • cultural acceptance
  • allergies
  • health concerns
  • environmental impact
  • ethical considerations
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