Social media enable people to keep in touch with each other and learn about news events. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
In the modern
world
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media
is an inevitable factor. It connects people
with each other and know
about Change the verb form
knows
on time
news flash and incidents. Add a hyphen
on-time
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view
there are more negative sides than positive as will be now discussed.
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To begin
with benefits, the social web has high
contribution in communication nowadays when compared to Correct article usage
a high
past
. Correct article usage
the past
For example
, before people
communicate only through letters and telephone calls if they were in far
distance but these days it is very easy to stay in touch with friends and family by social Correct article usage
a far
media
platforms like whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
messanger
and Correct your spelling
messenger
wechat
. Correct your spelling
WeChat
Furthermore
, currently
the editorials are Add a comma
,currently
easly
available through Correct your spelling
easily
you tube
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youtube
twitter
and all. Now, Change the capitalization
Twitter
people
can watch and discover every news instant and express their own opinions and commands infront
of the public.
Despite these, the social network Correct your spelling
in front
have
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has
prominent
role in damaging Add an article
a prominent
of
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mind
to criminal situations. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
For instance
, presently society is addicted to internet-based social networking. They are keen to watch adventures as well as crime stories and follow the same in the real life. Mostly, the
social Correct article usage
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media
such
as facebook
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Facebook
instagram
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Instagram
such
videos and young people
showing
the same to catch up others attention. Wrong verb form
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This
will ended
in death or murder. Change the form of the verb
end
Moreover
, people
are very interested to take selfies and upload in
social Change preposition
on
media
. For that
they are choosing some weird situations and results Add a comma
,that
to
danger. Change preposition
in
Also
now in family
, members Add an article
the family
not
have time to speak Change the verb form
do not
did not
each
other because they are spending more time Change preposition
to each
in
the social webs. Change preposition
on
Hence
, they losing
family respect and warm relationships.
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lose
the
social networks are influencing Correct article usage
apply
lifestyle
of society a lot. Correct article usage
the lifestyle
People
are misusing these advancements results in consequences. However
, When used in a charitable way, it can do good for society.Submitted by anjuvarughese015 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...