In some countries, governments are encouraging businesses and industries to move to regional areas outside big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In many nations around the world, authorities are promoting the transition of large firms
companies
from urban to rural settlements. Correct word choice
and companies
Although
, consequences arise Linking Words
as a result
, Linking Words
however
, I believe that the merits of having Linking Words
such
a trend far supersede the negative outcomes. Linking Words
This
essay will discuss the disadvantages and Linking Words
then
the advantages of urban-rural industrialization Linking Words
follow
by a reasoned conclusion Wrong verb form
followed
thereafter
.
Shifting business centres to suburbs from city centres means massive clearance of forest life with replacement by building. Linking Words
Consequently
, there are disturbances Linking Words
of
nature leading to conditions like the greenhouse effect. Change preposition
in
For example
, In the absence of trees and grasses, the rate of photosynthesis by plants is reduced leading to the build-up of carbon monoxide that causes increased atmospheric temperature. Linking Words
Hence
Linking Words
given
rise to global warming. Wrong verb form
giving
Moreover
, open fields and landscapes are places of natural beauty that add value to a nation. Linking Words
Accordingly
, they serve as tourist attractions Linking Words
generation
money for the government. Replace the word
generating
Therefore
, their conversion into buildings could reduce federal revenue.
Despite the downside of rural development, the benefits are far Linking Words
overwhelming
. Correct quantifier usage
more overwhelming
Firstly
, it leads to the growth of communities and villages. Linking Words
In other words
, the establishment of basic infrastructures like industries and various enterprises Linking Words
create
employment for indigenes and Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
foreigns
. Correct your spelling
foreigners
For instance
, recent studies have shown that most people working in big towns Linking Words
also
like to invest in it. Linking Words
Thus
, if more people are attracted to the villages, their contribution will enhance development. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a trend like Linking Words
this
will lead to the decongestion of municipals. To Linking Words
further
illustrate, indigenes will prefer to remain in their communities Linking Words
while
some outsiders from busy towns will seek greener pastures from the suburbs Linking Words
due to
industrialization.
In conclusion, developing a community is not without merits and demerits. But I believe it is far more advantageous Linking Words
due to
the positive impact on the economy.Linking Words
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task response
Ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed thoroughly. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages with more depth and clarity.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a clear and logical flow of ideas throughout the essay. Use transition words to connect sentences and paragraphs more effectively.