Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter • explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital • say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do • give details of when you would be available for this work Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to your advertisement about the volunteering opportunity at your hospital. I would like to express my interest in joining your team. My grandmother was a patient at your hospital 6 months back but unfortunately passed away due to the complications of the Covid 19 virus. While in the hospital, a group of volunteers kept visiting her
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basis, reading her stories, chatting with her, and so on...
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caring gesture gave her moral support and relief, which was most needed and appreciated in her
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, I would love to pay
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gentle act forward. I have always been good with elderly people, I enjoy discussing their life's experiences and
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from their earned wisdom.
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days experience. I am currently pursuing my master's degree at the local college, which is a 5-minute walk from your hospital, my daily schedule is from Monday to Friday 8:00 to 5:00 pm. So I can free up few hours from 6:00 to 8:00 before heading home.
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, I am available on Saturday morning. Thank you for the great work that your are doing, and I am looking to be part of your amazing community. Regards
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