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Band 3.5

summerise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comaprisons where relevant.

The given bar chart describes the information about the
divorce
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 rates in two European nations namely
Finland
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 and
Sweden
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 over the five
year
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 periods between 2011 and 2015, units are measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that clearly, over the
first
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 to four during the given periods
Sweden
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divorce
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rate
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 was increased than
Finland
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, but,
last
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 period
Finland
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rate
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 was the most in
Sweden
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. According to the graph illustrates, in the initial period of time
Sweden
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divorce
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 proportion was 44 per cent and
this
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rate
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 was increased by 5% in the following
year
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. From 2013 to 2015, there was a gradual fall in the
divorce
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rate
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 of
Sweden
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 from 47 to 37%. In terms of
Finland
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, in 2011, the
divorce
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 number had just below two fifths after the
next
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year
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,
this
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 figure for decreased slightly, with an average of just below one
third
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. But, in 2013, the
divorce
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rate
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 was increased gradually, which is 39% and the
next
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year
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, there was a slight rise, with an average of just above two fifths, in the final
year
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, the
divorce
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rate
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 was increased, which is 43 per cent.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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