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Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.

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There is denying the fact that the main purpose of
hobbies
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 is arguable. the question is why most
people
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 do not care about spending their
time
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 doing their
hobbies
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 and what the effect of it on the individual and
society
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. While it is held belief that the
hobbies
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 are needed
time
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, but lifestyle become different for many
people
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 these days,they feel should be working almost of their
time
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 to can provide the primary needs for themselves or for children, because everything become expensive. So They spend most of their energy during work
time
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 by the site for a long
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 in their office , so after they back home just need to relax and sleep. On one hand ,
people
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 stop doing their
hobbies
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 because of technology , when
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person spends his free moment chatting with friends or playing online games
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 of doing some healthy activity .
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, it is having an adverse effect on the individual and
society
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. The
health
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 problem increased during a few years ago as
health
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 organization statices, especially heart diseases, diabetes and depression, community have become more distance between each other , and lack of feel peace in most of the
people
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 . In conclusion ,
hobbies
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 are a healthy source to make the community more creative and have good
health
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 , where they can lose a lot of stress and develop their skills in a different field , away from work or other routine problems. But quite doing that led to many issues that
society
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 found difficult to deal with it.In conclusion ,
hobbies
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 are a healthy source to make the community more creative and have good
health
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 , where they can lose a lot of stress and develop their skills in a different field , away from work or other routine problems. But quite doing that led to many issues the
society
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 found difficult to deal with it

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Devote time
  • Hobbies
  • Nowadays
  • Busy
  • Fast-paced
  • Lifestyles
  • Work and career
  • Technology
  • Digital entertainment
  • Limited
  • Free time
  • Lack of motivation
  • Mental wellbeing
  • Physical wellbeing
  • Decreased
  • Social interactions
  • Creativity
  • Self-expression
  • Negative effects
  • Society
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