The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut subjects such as arts and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subject such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

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around the world are guided by various methods to face

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challenges. When preparing

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young generation , their time is very important and should be used efficiently. Since there will be no job opportunities in

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for

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and there will be much-advanced

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in the

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, I strongly believe that

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should be given more attention to subjects like information

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rather than the

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. With the phase of development of

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, within the

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few ,years most of the day to day work currently done by humans will be replaced by machines. A major requirement of humans will be controlling these machines and discovering new

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. To full fill

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requirement , the young generation currently studying in schools should give more attention to learning new

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, a major scientist in Europe recently told a science magazine that "

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should be learning more and more about information

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, and should give less focus on other subjects ".

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supports the fact that

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should be more focused on science rather than

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and

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. At the same time , In , the

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there will be fewer job opportunities for persons involved in melody and

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. In the current era , most graduates from the

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and

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schools are unemployed and they engage in jobs unrelevant to their education. In fact, In in the

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problem will be high and people with

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kind of qualification will be useless.

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, one American study suggests, with the current trend of information

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most people who are unfamiliar with automation will be unemployed in the

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the current education system should be more focused on

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than

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eventual there will be fewer job opportunities in the fields of entertainment and more chance for people with good technological knowledge . For these reasons, I strongly agree with the fact that

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should be more focused on science rather than the

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and

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.