The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut subjects such as arts and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subject such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

Children

around the world are guided by various methods to face

future

challenges. When preparing

this

young generation , their time is very important and should be used efficiently. Since there will be no job opportunities in

future

for

arts

and

music

and there will be much-advanced

technology

in the

future

, I strongly believe that

children

should be given more attention to subjects like information

technology

rather than the

arts

and

music

. With the phase of development of

technology

, within the

next

few ,years most of the day to day work currently done by humans will be replaced by machines. A major requirement of humans will be controlling these machines and discovering new

technology

. To full fill

this

requirement , the young generation currently studying in schools should give more attention to learning new

technology

.

For example

, a major scientist in Europe recently told a science magazine that "

children

should be learning more and more about information

technology

, and should give less focus on other subjects ".

this

supports the fact that

children

should be more focused on science rather than

arts

and

music

. At the same time , In , the

future

there will be fewer job opportunities for persons involved in melody and

arts

. In the current era , most graduates from the

arts

and

music

schools are unemployed and they engage in jobs unrelevant to their education. In fact, In in the

future

,

this

problem will be high and people with

this

kind of qualification will be useless.

For instance

, one American study suggests, with the current trend of information

technology

most people who are unfamiliar with automation will be unemployed in the

future

.

this

suggests

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the current education system should be more focused on

technology

than

arts

and

music

. In conclusion , with the fast-moving machinery, in the

,

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eventual there will be fewer job opportunities in the fields of entertainment and more chance for people with good technological knowledge . For these reasons, I strongly agree with the fact that

children

should be more focused on science rather than the

arts

and

music

.