Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment. Others say films have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment. Others say films have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

In schools and universities, girl tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

Some people believe that it’s not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.

Nowadays some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Personal experiences in leadership roles, facilitating changes, and mentoring others.