Some people believe that the only purpose of films is entertainment. Others say films have educational value. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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of human creativity which

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in sounds, pictures which good

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film

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extremetly

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needed that must be

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lives. The kinds of films

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on what purpose of it and what types of viewers they would like to achieve.

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entertainment and the other will

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the educational or moral

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to entertain

people

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to intensify the quality time with family or with their special person. Several types of

film

that could bring those feeling are fantasy,

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romanticism

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, comedy and daily

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superhero

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loves.

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of films,

people

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will be

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inspired

and ready to confront the

part of their lives.

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only entertain

people

however

film

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the film

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also

provide

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educational knowledge and moral

value

. For instants of

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group

are history, disaster, space observations, religions, and

autobioghrapy

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autobiography

inspirational

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person. The purpose of

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people

on which

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humans

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and humanity are the moral

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usually

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included in

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product which will increase viewers

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value

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. To conclude, both entertainment and educational

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are important for society. Those

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and support each other in order to gain live balance.

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