The relatively recent development of games on phones, computers, and TV consoles is extremely popular with people all over the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such electronic games?
Nowadays,technology is increasing by leaps and bounds with ample amenities like electronic gadgets,
therefore
people
spend a lot of time
in front of them which leads to several causes and benefits.this
essay will discuss both positive
and negative effects of playing Correct article usage
the positive
games
on televisions,laptops and mobile phones.
To embark on,there are ample merits of spending time
on games
.firstly
,it ensures entertainment and relax
to the public.Replace the word
relaxation
moreover
,people
do not want to go outside to play,because technology facilitate
more Change the verb form
facilitates
games
on electronic gadgets,so people
get a chance to play at home without the intervention of other people
.secondly
,these days,adolescents addicted
to Add a missing verb
are addicted
play
Change the verb form
playing
games
like the pubg
and hitman,these Correct your spelling
pub
games
very
useful to them.Add a missing verb
are very
for instance
,according to study
,Correct article usage
a study
people
who plays
Change the verb form
play
games
frequently,there is a chance to acquire problem solving
skill as well as Add a hyphen
problem-solving
decision maker
,Add a hyphen
decision-maker
furthermore
their brain Add a comma
,furthermore
sharp
compared to other Add a missing verb
are sharp
people
who do not plays
Change the verb form
play
games
.
On another hand,games
have also
brought negative
impact on Correct article usage
a negative
people
.initially
,people
do not get enough time
to do their personal work.thus
,they have to spend Correct article usage
a limit
limit
Change the form of the verb
limited
time
on games
.especially,students can not concentrate on their studies as they habituated to play on mobiles.additionally
,lack of communication limited among people
by playing games
.sometimes it leads to spoil
life.Change the verb form
spoiling
secondly
,there is a chance to get eye problems .for example
,according to the word
health organisation,many Correct your spelling
world
people
are suffering from blurred vision or lost vision.
To conclude,electronic gadgets are an indispensable thing in everyone's life,but they should not addict to them.because it leads to many problems.parents should not allow their offsprings
to use mobiles.Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
