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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. -explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 missive to let you know that my employee id is 123 and I am working as a Marketing and Sales employee for around 4 years.
However
,as per the company ,
a
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policy I find myself suitable for the head office
branch
 which is located internationally,as
besides
 my work experience I have earned several certificates of the best employee during my tenure.
As a result
,I want to spend 6 months in the company's Japan
branch
 in spite of getting promoted to the same locality. I wanted to be a part of the head office
branch
 because I will get more exposure which will be beneficial in the later stage when I will rejoin the
branch
. I will manage my duties and responsibilities of the home
branch
 while I am in a foreign
branch
 by working from the location in the evening.Apart from
this
,my co-worker Sachin who is a junior Marketing manager will address all the issues allocated to my position. To initiate the process,it is essential that as a manager you must approve my request.As well as,it would be great if you will arrange the accommodation and taxi facility on the company's behalf. I hope to hear from you soon Yours faithfully, Haman
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