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Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the citizens. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is a huge debate about who should be responsible
of
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 the environmental aspect in a country.
This
 discussion has evolved into two different groups
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the
first
 believes that the government should be the one who
take
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cares
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 of the plant, while
other
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 believes that it is the
individuals’s
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 responsibility.
This
 essay will examine both sides of
this
 argument in will following paragraphs I agree with the former. On one side, there is a group
who
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 thinks that a regime should take the call when it comes to any issue related to
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 citizens. The main reason why
this
 group believes that
people
 should blame the authority regarding
calutaving
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calculating
plant
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plants
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, clean water, and climate.
Thus
, the
cabint
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cabinet
 must protect and serve
people
.
Moreover
, another reason why an individual has the belief that authorities must take charge of
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surrounding
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 is
because
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 they have an abundance of resources and labour.
As a result
, because a regime has these advantages,
people
 should be blamed
its
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 authority if there is an increase in the CO2 level in the air.
On the other hand
, there is a consensus that has the notion that
people
 should give their hand to
government
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; in fact, they should take the role of maintaining, protecting, and enhancing the green aspect. The main reason why a consensus argues that
citizen
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citizens
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 should be blamed in the
first
 place
if
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 a country had a negative impact
such
 as climate change.
Furthermore
, even if a regime has a plethora of
manpowers
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manpower
, it would be impossible to clean every street, river, or even
a
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forest.
Although
that
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governments
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 plays
huge
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 role
on
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 fighting climate change,
people
 should try to collaborate with
government
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 on
this
 mission. Not to mention, that it is crucial for someone to be aware of
this
problamtic
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problematic
. In conclusion, I believe that both sides have merits. On balance,
however
, it is my opinion that households should take the charge
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 everything related to nature,
habitate
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habitat
, and lands.
This
 is to say that living in the consumerism era
people
 are the main source of
this
 conundrum.
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