you recently e on a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe Competition and prize About the photograph Invite your friend.

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Dr Rossi, I hope you have radiant health and the best of spirits. Today I am writing

this

letter to inform you that, I have won a photography competition and my photo is going to be displayed in an exhibition. To embark with, every year in my region a photography competition is organised by an NGO.

This

NGO is very famous in our city.

This

year I have participated and you will be happy to know that I have won the

first

prize.

In addition

, the price is a trophy, a certificate and BDT. 20,000 cash. I am very delighted about it.

Moreover

last

month I went to my uncle village. The serenity of the place amazed me.

Furthermore

, the place is full of natural beauty. Surprisingly I saw some peacocks and peahens on the lawn of my uncle house and without wasting time I just took some close-ups, that even I could not believe my eyes when I saw those photographs.

Last

but not the least,

this

year my pictures are going to be presented in an exhibition which will be held in Shilpakala Academy. I hope that you will come and enjoy my achievement. Please come if possible. I hope we will meet soon. I will wait for you you. No more today. With love, Zannatul

Submitted by Zannatul Irin on Tue Feb 01 2022

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