you recently e on a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe Competition and prize  About the photograph  Invite your friend.

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Dr Rossi,  I hope you have radiant health and the best of spirits. Today I am writing
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letter to inform you that, I have won a photography competition and my photo is going to be displayed in an exhibition. To embark with, every year in my region a photography competition is organised by an NGO.
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NGO is very famous in our city.
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year I have participated and you will be happy to know that I have won the
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prize.
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, the price is a trophy, a certificate and BDT. 20,000 cash. I am very delighted about it.
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,
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month I went to my uncle village. The serenity of the place amazed me.
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, the place is full of natural beauty. Surprisingly I saw some peacocks and peahens on the lawn of my uncle house and without wasting time I just took some close-ups, that even I could not believe my eyes when I saw those photographs.
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but not the least,
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year my pictures are going to be presented in an exhibition which will be held in Shilpakala Academy. I hope that you will come and enjoy my achievement. Please come if possible.  I hope we will meet soon. I will wait for you you. No more today. With love, Zannatul
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