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Some people are making new friends by using socializing network website and Internet chat rooms. Some people say that this is a good thing. Other people say that people should make new friends by face-to-face chat. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

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At present we are living in a modern era. In
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 modern, world we have the availability of modern technologies. By using
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 we can make new
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. Some
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 said that it is a splendid idea whereas others oppose and says
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 friendship making is a better idea. In my point of view,
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 should make
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 with,
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 friendship is better because it is safe. If
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 make
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 by talking side by side they will understand their feeling and emotion.
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,
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 can understand other
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 nature and their characteristics.
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, it gives us chance to know a person very closely.
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, if
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 make
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 friendships it is beneficial in many ways,
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 as, they can help each other when needed, they can spend quality time together, watching movies together and so on.
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, my best friend's name is Rossi, we
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 meet at school, since
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 we have had a friendship, and it is getting stronger day by day. We both help each other when we need. We do care for Each Other as well.
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, some
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 feel that making
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 on social media and on websites are the best idea. They can meet new
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 and make new
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. They can know about new cultures, traditions and environments.
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, they can deteriorate the discrimination between countries. In the same way, it is not safe because sometimes
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 many problems when they make new
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 on social media. Sometimes boys use girls photos and send friend requests on Facebook and they misuse them.
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, I read an article, where I read many
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 now using false pictures and misguided others. In conclusion, I can say that every coin has two sides like making new
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 and on social media. In my point of view,
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 should make
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