Write a letter to a newspaper editor about the poor condition of a historic building in your area. In the letter you should What building are you writing about? Describe the current condition of the building What should be done in this situation

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Dear Sir, The main endeavour of writing
this
letter is to express my concern about the deteriorating condition of the famous building which is Queen’s library. It is an ancient library and was made by Queen Victoria so it is the most heritage of our city.
Besides
that, It is a symbol of the historical tradition and culture of our country.
However
, the building is now in devastating condition because it has not done any maintenance for the
last
decade. So, please let me take a moment to elaborate on it.
Firstly
, the colour is faded
consequently
, it looks very old and it would be more difficult to identify by people.
Secondly
,
although
the pillars are enough strong, roofs and walls are become extremely weak. I hope you can understand my above-mentioned situation.
Moreover
, I would like to offer some suggestions, which will be helpful to make an improved state of the building.
First
of all, the library should be painted with dark colour along with nameplate so it is easy for people to detect it.
Last
but not least, roofs should be replaced with another one in order to avoid incidents. I would be glad if you could pass these suggestions to the higher management authority and hopefully, they will take some corrective actions as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Sejal Patel
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • moreover
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  • despite

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