In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays obesity has become really widespread among young

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their life in danger. I completely agree with the argument that the responsibility of tackling

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issue falls on

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since they have enough power and funding. I believe there are several actions worth being taken by the

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to solve

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problem in the most appropriate way.In my opinion obesity of

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originates from two main areas; the

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that

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eat and their daily or weekly

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,so, since authorities have the required power and money, they can effectively improve the two areas for our

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. Regarding the

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that kids eat, one thing that authorities can do is to introduce school meals which are healthy and full of vitamins and proteins for

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.

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can include several types of

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ranging from different fruits to vegetables.

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, another action related to the

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worth taking is to introduce higher taxes for

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eating fast

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.

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measure acts as a deterrent and in

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way, families try to provide less amount of fast

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for their

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during the year.

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, they can introduce some specific subjects in the schools' curriculum in which their teachers talk about the benefits of having a healthy lifestyle and diet and

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discuss the negative consequences of eating too much junk

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and their long term effects on our life. These kinds of subjects require hiring some new part-time teachers who are actually doctors and to do

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,

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have to allocate a part of their budget to that.

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, creating some cartoons on social media with the same topic can

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have a significant effect on

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's attitudes towards a healthy lifestyle. In regard to physical

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,

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have to do anything in order to increase the hours and time that

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spend on physical

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because these kinds of

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can considerably burn a huge amount of the calories that

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gain during a day and help them be fit.

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objective can be achieved by introducing some extra sports subjects to the schools' curriculum. Since

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are enthusiastic about these

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, in a long time they will be moved towards a healthy lifestyle. In conclusion, the obesity rate among

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has increased dramatically which may bring several health issues for them and I believe that

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can best address

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problem since they have enough resources to decrease

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rate.