When a person spends most of his or her time working a job with little job satisfaction, their life loses meaning. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Job
satisfaction is extremely crucial in any employee job
. A lot of employees
give too much time to their work but they are not satisfied with their job
and stay in discomfort. In this
essay, we will see the impact of these kinds of jobs on employees
and I will share my opinion as well.
For some people
, sometimes it is difficult to switch jobs or to find a new job
and due to their circumstances, they stay in an environment
where they are not happy. The reason for dissatisfaction is nature of the work is not up to their job
position or maybe the environment
is toxic. For instance
, a person is working in a company and he is well educated and he is doing his job
perfectly, at the same time he is eligible for the promotion as well, but on the other hand
, due to favouritism in office some other employees
are getting promotions and he stays on the same position. Those types of issues push people
into depression and mental disorders.
There are a lot of incidents reported that people
attempt suicide, due to depression and after some analysis reports identified that due to unsatisfaction in the job
, a person takes this
step. Moreover
, too many people
, face mental issues, due to the toxic work environment
. on a timely manner, employers have to analyze their environment
and try to make the workplace interesting and attractive for their employees
, in addition
, giving incentives and bonuses based on organizational policies.
In conclusion, job
satisfaction is extremely important and in my opinion, if a person is not satisfied then
he have to plan to move to some other job
rather than stay in that job
that will affect his personal life or he starts facing mental issues.Submitted by shan.afzal4 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite