The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing.What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
Over the two or three decades, family bonding has been reducing tremendously than ever before.
As a result
, the conventional method of families
getting together to eat meals is eliminating
. Wrong verb form
eliminated
Families
spilting
and hectic work schedule is the main Correct your spelling
spitting
spilling
reasons
for this
situation; This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons
.
On the one hand, there are plenty reasons
for the traditional method of Change preposition
of reasons
families
together to eat
habits changed. One of the main causes is that Change the form of the verb
eating
families
live in a separete
place while they should Correct your spelling
separate
be eat
Change the verb form
be eating
be eaten
separetly
due to migrants in overseas. Correct your spelling
separately
For example
, numerous Indians live in Europe without their family members, hence
, they should be eaten alone. Another main cause is that
the hectic work schedule, nowadays, workers have Correct word choice
apply
over
workload, Correct article usage
an over
therefore
, they go to their office or company early and comes
late Wrong verb form
come
night
while they have to eat with their fellow workers Change preposition
at night
besides
the families
. These are the main reasosn
for Correct your spelling
reasons
reason
families
cannot eat together.
On the other hand
, there are numerous effcets
of Correct your spelling
effects
this
situation. One of the major impacts is that families
cannot spent
much more Change the verb form
spend
times
with their family members as well as they do not know about what happens in their family. Another impact is that Fix the agreement mistake
time
this
situation can lead to providing isolation and homesickness, as a result
, numerous persons might be killed themselves. For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 30% of the
mankind has killed themselves due to homesickness.
To conclude, the conventional method of eating habit has changed Correct article usage
apply
tremendousy
; Migrants and hectic work schedule Correct your spelling
tremendously
is
the main Change the verb form
are
reasons
for this
; providing isolation and homesickness is the impacts of this
trend. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem for the family members and I hope this
process is conducive to building a healthy and happier society.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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