The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing.What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

Over the two or three decades, family bonding has been reducing tremendously than ever before.
As a result
, the conventional method of
families
getting together to eat meals is
eliminating
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.
Families
spilting
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spitting
spilling
and hectic work schedule is the main
reasons
for
this
situation;
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following
reasons
. On the one hand, there are plenty
reasons
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for the traditional method of
families
together to
eat
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eating
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habits changed. One of the main causes is that
families
live in a
separete
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separate
place while they should
be eat
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be eating
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separetly
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separately
due to migrants in overseas.
For example
, numerous Indians live in Europe without their family members,
hence
, they should be eaten alone. Another main cause is
that
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the hectic work schedule, nowadays, workers have
over
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workload,
therefore
, they go to their office or company early and
comes
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late
night
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while they have to eat with their fellow workers
besides
the
families
. These are the main
reasosn
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reasons
reason
for
families
cannot eat together.
On the other hand
, there are numerous
effcets
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effects
of
this
situation. One of the major impacts is that
families
cannot
spent
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much more
times
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with their family members as well as they do not know about what happens in their family. Another impact is that
this
situation can lead to providing isolation and homesickness,
as a result
, numerous persons might be killed themselves.
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 30% of
the
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mankind has killed themselves due to homesickness. To conclude, the conventional method of eating habit has changed
tremendousy
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tremendously
; Migrants and hectic work schedule
is
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the main
reasons
for
this
; providing isolation and homesickness is the impacts of
this
trend. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem for the family members and I hope
this
process is conducive to building a healthy and happier society.
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