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In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Globally, people are discussing
children
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's
weight
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 and
health
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that is
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 getting worse. Some individuals think that it is only the
government
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that is
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 responsible for tackling
this
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 issue. In my opinion, I agree with the argument.
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, it is not only the
government
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 that can play the main role to solve the problem, it is,
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 on every single individual who can work
hand
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 in
hand
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 to
support
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 the measure.
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, it is clear that the role of the
government
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 is significantly powerful to curb
children
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's overweight and bad
health
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.
This
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 is because the
government
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 has the power and authority to impose massive campaigns about how to control
weight
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 and maintain the
health
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 of
children
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 to wider society through different media.
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, the
government
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 can publish campaign videos on public television and govern school teachers to teach their students how to be aware of being healthy.
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, the message of the importance of becoming fit and ideal-body
weight
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 can easily reach the public.
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, it is inadequate to merely rely on the
government
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 to solve the issue. Everybody has
also
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 the same role to
support
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 the
government
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's work in making
children
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 healthy. Imagine if all aspects have been conducted by the
government
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, the public,
however
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, does want to
support
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 the efforts of the governments do. The result of
this
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 must be chaos.
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, in Australia, the local
government
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 has done plenty of programmes to decrease the rate of overweight and unhealthy
children
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.
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, it turns out to be nothing as the local citizens do not care about them.
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, individuals should
also
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 take charge of supporting the governments' deeds. In conclusion,
although
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 many efforts have been conducted by the
government
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 to maintain
children
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's
health
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, without
support
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 from the public, these will be useless.
In other words
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, the
government
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 should work
hand
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 in
hand
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 with the public to achieve the goal which is good
children
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's
health
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 and body
weight
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.
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