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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some problems associated with reliance on computer and what are some of the possible solutions

#students #computers #reliance #computer
Now ,days as
tecnology
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technology
 is growing quickly
pupile
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pupils
pupil
pile
 becoming more and more dependent on computers .
however
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convenient
 education is made by the use of technology,
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associated
 problems
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persists
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 which I am going to discuss and try to provide possible solutions for the same.
First
 of all young one's are spending more and more time online either
studing
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studying
 or playing games which is promoting a
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sedentary
 lifestyle in them, Adding
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further
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there
their
 social life is suffering as much as
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there
their
 physical health is.
This
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 problems
such
 as
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obesity
, depression, underdeveloped social as well as communication skills. For a clear illustration, in a recent
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 it's been found out that using any device for 4 hours straight has
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hazardous
hazards
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 impact on
eyes
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 and brain leading to
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depression
 and other
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 problems.
On the other
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 these detrimental impacts on children can be minimised by the collective efforts of the school, parents, and
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society
.
For
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 schools can make sports
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mandatory
 part of school's and encourage
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 students to adopt a proactive life,
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where
 as society and parents can organise sports events for
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there
the
adolesents
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adolescents
.
In
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guardiens
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guardians
 can put restrictions on the use of technology in the home environment to
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increase
increased
 human interactions. In,
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conclusion
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 all depends on us how we use the resources and to what extent. as
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responsible
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 of
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society
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it's
 our duty to keep our
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generation's
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 and provide them with proper
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guidance
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