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People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #sports #activities #scuba #bungee #life #rescue #workers #risk #lives
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the new generation youngers are more attracted towards the news
games
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. Individuals are indulging in new gaming activities
such
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 as Scuba diving and bungee which are dangerous
games
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 and they should be blamed for the loss of their
lives
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 and they should not be saved by the
rescue
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workers
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 who risk their
lives
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 to save them. I agree to the extent that they are responsible for their
lives
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 I believe that being human beings they have some responsibility
over
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 the players.
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 of all, the new
games
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 are invented day by day and
people
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 are attracted to them and these
games
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 are becoming famous but these are more threatening for the
people
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 as these
games
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 can take the life of an individual.
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, it is the duty of the organizers to use the safety features as much as they can. players in spite of having the knowledge of the life-threatening
games
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 are playing these
games
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 by putting their
lives
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 in danger and they are responsible for
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.
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, in China, most
people
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 who played
the
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threatening activity
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 were dead due to the malfunction of the machines.
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 they should be responsible for their
lives
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.
On the other hand
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,
people
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 put their
lives
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 at risk and when any incident happens, the
rescue
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workers
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 helped by putting their
lives
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 in danger and being human
being
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 they have
also
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 the responsibility to tackle these types of situations to save the
people
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 from danger.
for example
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, in recent studies, the
rescue
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workers
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 lost their
lives
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 in protecting the
people
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 who played life-threatening
games
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. to conclude, the
people
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 should not put their
lives
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 at risk of death and in case of any death occurs
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 he or should be responsible for that.
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,
rescue
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workers
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 still have responsibilities to save the
lives
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 of players.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inherent risk
  • assume full responsibility
  • acknowledging
  • engagement
  • unduly
  • voluntary risks
  • extreme sports enthusiasts
  • strict safety protocols
  • mandatory training
  • mitigate
  • thrill
  • personal satisfaction
  • endangering
  • rescue personnel
  • drain public resources
  • divert emergency services
  • critical interventions
  • personal accountability
  • consequences
  • moral and practical burden
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