You got a job offer in a different country, why did you change your job, what is the new profile about, take suggestions from your friend who is there in that country Write a letter to your friend.

Dear Anne, I am writing
this
letter to express my divine delight fullness about the offer letter I received from Canadian Bank
this
week.According to them, I have to join within 2 months.
However
,
Firstly
, my current employment was not recommended in my name on the Internationally transfer list due to Administration issues.
Thus
, I applied silently because I have plans to get my daughter's add mission to Toronto for
further
studies.
Moreover
,By the Grace of God, the new Job role being offered to me is as relevant as my current Role,
For example
: Branch Banking ,
Secondly
,though I don't need to get worried, Rather, I would like to look into the cultural part to mingled with them only. Since you have been living there for the past 5 years, I would be needing your assistance regarding accommodation, locality and the best college for the admission of my daughter.
also
, I would like to know the bank account opening details so that I could transfer some funds before reaching there, to get a push on Kitchen money.
However
,
Lastly
,do let me know when are you available to talk on the phone in detail as well. Best Wishes ZF
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