Some people believe that children should be allowed to choose what subjects they study at school. Others argue that everyone should study the same subjects. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning experience
  • motivation
  • enthusiasm
  • strengths and weaknesses
  • skill development
  • future careers
  • creativity
  • innovation
  • standardized curriculum
  • foundational knowledge
  • equal opportunities
  • well-rounded development
  • over-specialization
  • broad-based education
  • career options
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