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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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Computers
 are one of the most convenient ways of accessing
information
. Some people say the positive outcomes outweigh the negative ones in replacement of comfort and convenience for
students
 who are learning.
Therefore
, it has been a boon for individuals to get instant access to
information
 or materials that may aid them in their studies or research.
However
, the latter argues that
constant
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use
 of
computers
 in education is a negative outcome. Some individuals say that
computers
 may even hinder ones
pursuance
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in
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 education.
However
, I disagree.
This
 essay will detail why an increase in technology in education is beneficial to
students
 and teachers. In the past,
information
 about a subject was accessed through public libraries.
This
 means that a student has to find a specific book to get the necessary
information
 that he needs to conduct his/her research in their studies. Which costs time and convenience.
However
, still prevalent
till
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this
 day. Some people prefer to access
information
 through the
use
 of
computers
 on the internet. It is clear that the internet has provided access to
students
 to
information
 more than ever before. Websites
such
 as Wikipedia, Quora and other well-known
information
-based sites provide immediate
information
 to
students
 based on search queries. Some people say that
computers
 have a negative impact on one's self in pursuing growth. As content creators and celebrities pump out content on platforms
such
 as Youtube, Tiktok, Instagram and so on. Misuse of time or procrastination can be the main culprit for
students
 in order for them to focus on their studies. Some might argue that it is only meant to be a "form of entertainment". But companies are smart; they have tweaked and configured their platform's algorithm to make content to be addictive; as
such
, more are inclined to stay on the platform rather than
to
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focus on their tasks or assignments. To conclude, technology and the
use
 of
computers
 is a positive income for
students
 and teachers and is essential for an individual's everyday tasks. Given the fact that
computers
 are useful proper guidance among teachers and parents is a must for managing a student's time in computer
use
.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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