The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year.
The above-highlighted
pie
charts
illustrate the percentage of electricity
produced in Scotland
. The two
different pie
charts
exhibit the amount
of electricity
produced by seven different kinds of energy
resources in the past 2 decades and last
year
in Scotland
.
The first pie
Charts
depicts the information of electricity
manufactured by resources in Scotland
two
decades ago where Coal had
generated the highest Unnecessary verb
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electricity
with the amount
of 41.4 % energy
for the past 20 Change preposition
of energy
years
. Gas was the second
main source of energy
with average electric production of 22.3 % which is 19.1 % lesser than Coal. Nuclear was considered as
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third
main source of energy
to produce electricity
with a total amount
of 19.6 % of energy
. The other kind of energy
resource was able to produce less than 10 % of Electricity
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whereas
oil
was marked as the lowest capability to generate electricity
with an average of 2.1 % in the past two
decades.
The record also
proved that Scotland
had used the same source of energy
in order to produce Electricity
past
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the past
year
. In contrast
to the other kind of sources
, coal had
generated the highest Unnecessary verb
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amount
of electricity
with the highest amount
of 32.7 % of energy
in the last
year
. Then
, nuclear had
generated 26.4 % of Unnecessary verb
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energy
and the third
-highest was Gas with a total amount
of 21.7 %. The other sources
didn’t generate much electricity
. The minimum energy
was
generated was by Unnecessary verb
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oil
with the
total Correct article usage
a
amount
of 4.0% of energy
in the past years
.
In conclusion, the above two
pie
charts
gave a brief explanation that Scotland
had
used the same Unnecessary verb
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sources
of energy
and the energy
produced was almost the same for the past years
. Among all the different sources
, Coal was the highest and oil
was the lowest in producing energy
for generating electricity
. Moreover
, other resources of energy
such
as Nuclear, Other renewables and oil
had increased their production in the last
year
. Some of the sources
of energy
had decreased their productivity last
year
compared to the last
twenty years
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