People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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In 2010, in
India
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nearly 30 per cent of the population lives in urban
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while nearly 70 per cent of the population lives in rural fields. But currently,
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trend is changing, a
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of
people
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are shifting from rural or urban
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to metro
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as Delhi, Mumbai Kolkata and Bengaluru. When
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shift from their native place to metro
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they have to deal with a
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of problems.
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essay will highlight the problems that human beings encounter when they migrate to a large city and how can the authority motivate them to move to their regional places. The
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problem, they face is finding a cheap apartment. As a
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of
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are residing in the large
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so the price of a house is like touching the sky or we can say finding a flat or house at a low price is a very difficult task, even rent of the house is
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high. Due to
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, poor
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have to live in slum
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. In slum
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, water, sanitation and hygiene are not good. Due to
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, they develop water-borne diseases.
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, the price of groceries is very high. The
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problem is the pollution in these
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is very high, it can create respiratory disorders. Despite these problems,
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still continue to live in the metro
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due to better education and employment. The government are launching an of
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schemes to help
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like urban development schemes or urban health centres. Apart from it, the government can take new initiatives like providing job opportunities in their regional towns. The ministry should encourage MSME and entrepreneurs for creating opportunities. In conclusion, the government should initiate infrastructure development in towns so that
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can live in their own town and
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get employment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban congestion
  • traffic jams
  • lengthy commutes
  • high cost of living
  • financial strain
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • green space
  • recreational areas
  • social isolation
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • public services strain
  • overpopulation
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