A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Rob, I am glad to hear from you again. Hope you and your family are well. I heard that you'

be going

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a camping holiday for the

first

time

this

summer. Have you chosen a place yet? If not, I'

recommend you a place called Angel

Island

which is located in southern Thailand. I'm sure that you'

be thanking for my recommended place. The

island

is so beautiful and the water is so clean.

Although

there'

usually be a lot of people during summer, a dozen of good spots you still can choose for camping along the

island

Moreover

, at night, you can easily see panorama views of the very clear sky from the beach. You'

never forget that views. I'd like to remind you something as well. It is about mosquitos. Whatever insects from

this

island

are so huge.

Therefore

, do not forget to bring some lotions for mosquitos, and

also

some tablets to prevent from catching a cold. So windy at the beach especially during the night. I still have a lot of work to clear.

Otherwise

, I'

go with you on

this

trip. If I've got a chance

summer, I'

probably camping with you there again. Hope you enjoy your camping trip on that

island

. All the best buddy. Yan

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