A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter, Explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Rob, I am glad to hear from you again. Hope you and your family are well. I heard that you'

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a camping holiday for the

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time

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summer. Have you chosen a place yet? If not, I'

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recommend you a place called Angel

Island

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which is located in southern Thailand. I'm sure that you'

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be thanking for my recommended place. The

island

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is so beautiful and the water is so clean.

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usually be a lot of people during summer, a dozen of good spots you still can choose for camping along the

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, at night, you can easily see panorama views of the very clear sky from the beach. You'

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never forget that views. I'd like to remind you something as well. It is about mosquitos. Whatever insects from

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island

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are so huge.

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, do not forget to bring some lotions for mosquitos, and

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some tablets to prevent from catching a cold. So windy at the beach especially during the night. I still have a lot of work to clear.

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go with you on

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trip. If I've got a chance

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summer, I'

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probably camping with you there again. Hope you enjoy your camping trip on that

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. All the best buddy. Yan

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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216 words

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