Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species.Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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tremendously controversy` heating up a debate over

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impact of human activities on plant and

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. While some claims hold up a strong view that it is not enough time to do anything, the opposite makes a statement that efficient action

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enhance

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situation

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should be taken. In my point of view, it is never

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late to take

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solution to improve

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difficult situation. Without a shadow of

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, there

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abundant convincing

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that it is too late to deal with a great many

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immense consequences which are made by humans on

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demand for parts of

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of some certain sorts of animal which is valuable to finance, health and fashion. Almost all

animals

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, which are the target of hunting, are being pushed to the verge of extinction.

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, crocodiles’ skins have been one of the iconic

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for some leading fashion brands like Gucci or Louis Vuitton.

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, it is reasonable to say that it is too late to affect negatively

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plant and animal species. While the tremendous consequences on

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and

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which are made by people’s

action

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are widely acknowledged, there are still have abundant remedies to revamp

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problem. Authorities or citizen should

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environmental organizations which

convinces

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prevents

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people to stop illegal hunting. And that

lead

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to

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decrease in poaching rate and the conservation of

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and

flora

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, WSPA-World Society for Protection of

Animals

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international organization and have

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branch in Africa, Asia , Europe, North America,... WSPA have been founded to protect

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and prevents illegal hunting like rhino hunted,.....

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, effective action like founding environmental organizations should be taken immediately because it has

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effect on

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and

flora

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In conclusion, a great deal of negative

impact

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have

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been made on

animals

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and plants,

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, it is never

to

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late to stop

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environment

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the environment

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. There are still a great many

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solutions to save

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the environment

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