Human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species.Some people say that it is too late to do anything. Some people think that we should take effective action to improve the situation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
tremendously controversy` heating up a debate over
negative
Add an article
the negative
show examples
impact of human activities on plant and
animals
. While some claims hold up a strong view that it is not enough time to do anything, the opposite makes a statement that efficient action
Fix the infinitive
to enhance
show examples
enhance
Change the verb form
enhances
show examples
situation
Correct article usage
the situation
show examples
should be taken. In my point of view, it is never
to
Replace the word
too
show examples
late to take
effective
Add an article
the effective
an effective
show examples
solution to improve
this
difficult situation. Without a shadow of
doubt
Add an article
a doubt
show examples
, there
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
abundant convincing
reason
Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
show examples
show
Correct pronoun usage
that show
show examples
that it is too late to deal with a great many
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
immense consequences which are made by humans on
flora
and
fauna
.
Ever-growing
Add an article
The ever-growing
An ever-growing
show examples
demand for parts of
body
Add an article
the body
show examples
of some certain sorts of animal which is valuable to finance, health and fashion. Almost all
animals
, which are the target of hunting, are being pushed to the verge of extinction.
For instance
, crocodiles’ skins have been one of the iconic
material
Fix the agreement mistake
materials
show examples
for some leading fashion brands like Gucci or Louis Vuitton.
Therefore
, it is reasonable to say that it is too late to affect negatively
on
Change preposition
apply
show examples
plant and animal species. While the tremendous consequences on
flora
and
fauna
which are made by people’s
action
Fix the agreement mistake
actions
show examples
are widely acknowledged, there are still have abundant remedies to revamp
this
problem. Authorities or citizen should
found
Wrong verb form
find
show examples
environmental organizations which
convinces
Change the verb form
convince
show examples
and
prevents
Change the verb form
prevent
show examples
people to stop illegal hunting. And that
lead
Change the verb form
leads
show examples
to
the
Correct article usage
a
show examples
decrease in poaching rate and the conservation of
fauna
and
flora
.
For example
, WSPA-World Society for Protection of
Animals
is
the
Correct article usage
an
show examples
international organization and have
abundant
Add an article
an abundant
show examples
branch in Africa, Asia , Europe, North America,... WSPA have been founded to protect
animals
and prevents illegal hunting like rhino hunted,.....
Hence
, effective action like founding environmental organizations should be taken immediately because it has
immense
Add an article
an immense
show examples
effect on
fauna
and
flora
In conclusion, a great deal of negative
impact
Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
show examples
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
been made on
animals
and plants,
however
, it is never
to
Replace the word
too
show examples
late to stop
protect
Wrong verb form
protecting
show examples
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
. There are still a great many
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
solutions to save
environment
Add an article
the environment
show examples
.
Submitted by hominhtrang995 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: