Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally believed that an individual dressing says a lot about their personality and culture. I strongly agree with
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I will give some reasons along with examples that how clothes play important role in recognition of a
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tradition.
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, many
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invariably wear clothes according to their tradition ,for they represent their religion by it. There are many cultures and traditions in the same religions of
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who respect what are they wearing, and especially the
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of the dressing matters to them depending on different genders.
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, in Pakistan majority of
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are Muslims,
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, there are a variety of traditions and cultures for separate areas and provinces. Like in
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of Punjab everyone has their own style of dressing.
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in KPK appearance of
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is very different as compared to Punjab or any other province. To illustrate, males cannot wear dark
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as, red,pink and orange while
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the female
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female
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females
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can wear the same
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.
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,
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females
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wear trousers, long shirt along with scarf which is not worn by
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of other areas.
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by
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an individual personality can
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be judged very easily because it is an overall look of every person which he/she selects for themselves.
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, many
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who wear bright
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with fitted stitching are mostly lively and fashionable.
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, those who wear loose and light
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are boring and dull.
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those who are always suited if they are going for
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the job
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are the punctual and tidy
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. After having discussed the pertinent points it can be inferred that
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the appearance
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of a person can predict their culture as well as character. In my opinion, dressing depicts a person's personality and religion and we should always respect everyone clothing.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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