Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally believed that an individual dressing says a lot about their personality and culture. I strongly agree with

this

statement. In

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I will give some reasons along with examples that how clothes play important role in recognition of a

persons

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tradition.

Firstly

, many

people

invariably wear clothes according to their tradition ,for they represent their religion by it. There are many cultures and traditions in the same religions of

people

who respect what are they wearing, and especially the

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of the dressing matters to them depending on different genders.

For instance

, in Pakistan majority of

people

are Muslims,

however

, there are a variety of traditions and cultures for separate areas and provinces. Like in

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of Punjab everyone has their own style of dressing.

Similarly

in KPK appearance of

people

is very different as compared to Punjab or any other province. To illustrate, males cannot wear dark

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such

as, red,pink and orange while

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the female

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female

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females

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can wear the same

color

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Furthermore

female

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females

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wear trousers, long shirt along with scarf which is not worn by

people

of other areas.

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clothes

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an individual personality can

also

be judged very easily because it is an overall look of every person which he/she selects for themselves.

For example

, many

people

who wear bright

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with fitted stitching are mostly lively and fashionable.

In contrast

, those who wear loose and light

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are boring and dull.

Besides

those who are always suited if they are going for

job

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the job

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are the punctual and tidy

people

. After having discussed the pertinent points it can be inferred that

appearance

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of a person can predict their culture as well as character. In my opinion, dressing depicts a person's personality and religion and we should always respect everyone clothing.

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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

attire
fashion trends
individuality
first impressions
designer labels
social status
cultural appropriation
dress codes
traditional garments
sartorial choices
symbolism in clothing
cultural identity
expression of self
global fashion industry
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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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The media has become too influential in peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.